[@Scarifar]: Yeah, that's fine. Accepted. [@Jinxlynx]: While the character's fine conceptually, I'd like to ask if you could edit the personality section to not have so many run-ons. It's hard to make out what's being said at times when a person can't tell when one sentence ends and another begins. [@Vee]: Er... I don't think the character quite fits the scene. Insanity isn't exactly... Amusing. I'd go so far as to say it detracts from the amusement on occasion, mainly because everyone now has to be wary of friendly fire at all times.