[@eemmtt]: Okay, uh...
I was kinda hoping that all the grammar would get fixed in there... Well, at least enough to make it coherent to the point where others could read it fluently. I can get the gist of what's being said, yes, but only a very very vague gist. Furthermore, a lot of things are still left unexplained, and it's getting to a point where it's a bunch of in-world jargon with vague rambling attached to it instead of just jargon.

As it stands, I can't accept the character, mainly because of how this RP works. If people aren't clear and concise with their definitions, statements, arguments, and descriptions, then it makes a huge mess of things because nobody understands how things actually work aside from the person RPing the character, and that only serves to muddy the waters even more because of the nature of conflicting explanations and further clarification, which in turn leads to a deadlock until things get sorted out. This becomes especially volatile in crossover RPs like this one, where things from different worlds are already coming into conflict and may not abide by the same rules.

I might be extrapolating in a direction that might not ever come to light, but the high likelihood of it happening coupled with what you have written leads me to believe that it might negatively impact the group as a whole. I'm not writing this to be mean, but this is just how I view the situation, honestly.