[quote=@Blueflame] What all do I need to change [/quote] Less change, more add, first are you playing as Dante from the DMC universe? Not sure if LeeRoy is allowing un-original characters, but you can probably create a character using the canon with similar skills/weapons. Regardless, presuming this was an original character. Name: Dante [b](Fine)[/b] Age: 17 [b](Fine)[/b] Appearance out of armor: (Devil may cry Dante)[b] (Provide a picture or a written description.)[/b] Appearance in armor: (my avatar but smaller) [b](Provide a description of the armour's capabilities, it it similar to steel plate or does it have supernatural resistance, if so what sort of damage can you expect it to repel?)[/b] Bio unknown: [b](Some characters need a Bio to work with, but having a hidden backstory is usually fine for Arena.)[/b] Weapons two revolvers: [b](Six shot? Are they magical in any way? Etc)[/b] A steampunk scythe: [b](Needs a better description. An ordinary scythe is literally useless as a weapon, is it a weaponized scythe? How sharp is it? What can it realistically cut.)[/b] Power polarization: [b](What does this mean? What is its limitations as a power, what are its strengths, etc.)[/b] Special ethereal chains: [b](Why are they special?)[/b] Like I said, check the link for an indepth look into what is expected of an Arena sheet. You have the basics set, but some things missing are physical attributes (at the moment your character would default with average human strength, speed, etc, which is clearly not what you're going for) and skills.