[@Melonhead] Tyvm for the help. [@Blueflame] Okay, I'm online now. I can help you since I'm off today. As a rule of thumb, I've noticed that any equipment, unless it is a very standard piece of equipment, generally needs about a paragraph of description. Say a Desert Eagle. We all know how they shoot, so we wouldn't need a description. But then we get into stuff like my Hi-Magnet Blade and we're gonna need a bit of explanation. If you catch my drift. Giving you a required length might help you out with filling in the gaps. Edit: Also absolutely not Dante from DMC. Not because I have anything against him, he's not the worst character I've ever seen. It's more that most conventional characters can't kill him. Kanitah, Fury, Skallagrim. These could, but I wouldn't call any of them conventional.