[@thewizardguy]unfortunately, I have to agree with a lot of what my Co-Gm has stated. Your abilities are unfathomably powerful, and comparable to one of the big bads I don't plan on introducing until more than halfway through this first arc. Teleporting non-chalantly is insane. There is already an established type of teleportation aptly titled warping which is very unstable, and taxing to use. Reality claws is basically a 'circumvent everything' offense, and your hammerspace infers a lot of rules about this universe, that I'm sorry to say, contradict the canon just a tad. Bending reality is... An instant denial in any shape or form. Those eyes are unacceptable (the robot eye made me chuckle tho, lel) I will admit, I like the void-scarred idea, and a lot of his backstory is very interesting, so if you can take that theory and craft it a little differently, I might be willing to accept it. I might even be willing to accept a MUCH less intense form of teleportation magic, but it might be a better idea to think of something else. Biggest issues: -Basically all of his magic -being exposed to the void directly (this would instantly kill him) pm me if you'd like more info on how void works and how you could apply this differently. On my phone, but I have Hatman in skype right now, so relay all concerns to him.