[@Jay Kalton] Looking forward to seeing it, let us know if you have any questions. [@howling rabbit] No problem, the changes are great! [@BioHazard] Yeah, you're good. Thanks for editing and welcome to the RP ^^ [@WeepingLiberty] Sounds good, no rush. [@sakurasan] I like the additions! Terror in Resonance had such a good OST. Also, I now have to find a legitimate reason to have Reina call Akira cute. [@PaulHaynek] I just looked over your CS, and I love the idea! Super unique to basically have the guardian as the primary character rather than the human. The only obvious issue I see with your sheet is that you don't have a magic section, which I'll ask you to add just above Sun Wukong's personality. The magic is categorised like this: [quote] [hider= Magic By Color] [color=00a651]Green-[/color] Plant [color=00aeef]Blue-[/color] Water/ Ice [color=#000000]Black-[/color] Darkness/ Decay White- Light/ Healing [color=fff200]Yellow-[/color] Electricity [color=9e0b0f]Red-[/color] Fire [color=a36209]Brown-[/color] Earth [color=f26522]Orange-[/color] Energy Transparent- Air/ Wind [color=92278f]Purple-[/color] Illusion [color=ed1c24]*NOTES*[/color] -A color that has more than one magic does not grant you access to both magics, unless your butterfly is 100% of that color. Otherwise, they are options and you must chose one or the other. -Just because the magic is associated with a certain color on the butterfly, it doesn't limit the color of the magic. For example; If a guardian had fire magic, their butterfly would be red, but the flames they produce could be black. [/hider] [/quote] and you'll need to write a short description on what Yueliang and Sun's magic can do. If you need examples, check the accepted characters, and if you need clarification, ask me! After you do that, we'll just need [@Obscene Symphony] to look over your sheet.