[quote=@Mr Allen J] [@Inuyasha] You should first limit the range a bit, because teleporting to the other side of the planet (without dying) is just silly. :P The other half of his ability is basically creating another dimension...? Interesting. The last criticism I have is when people use "the user" as pronouns in their power section because it just makes it look like you lifted it straight from powerlisting. lol Otherwise, the power seems fine with me. Just make those edits. [/quote] I don't know what powerlisting is; although a quick google search tells me its some form of wiki describing powers. That's just my writing style, I'll change it to Wei however. And yes, edits incoming, brace yourselves! EDIT: Bam, done. Made it so he can't do crazy traversals (see bottom of Weakness) Hopefully thats all in order.