[@Halvtand]
You're good. Go ahead and move him to the Character Tab.

[@Hillan]
The only thing I can tell that you've changed, is the fact that your character now has a girlfriend ..?
It might just be me missing things, so please do tell me what else you changed.

Also, the chances of bandits coming anywhere near even the outskirts of Gobi seems very implausible. They would have had to either take the tunnel or climb the cliffs and valleys that make up the "wall" around the village. Since no one really knows that the village is even there, they would have no reason to go through the trouble of climbing cliffs and/or valleys and if they would have taken the tunnel, they would have "come out" in the middle of the village and would have had to get past the "guard" at the "gate", who would likely have alerted the entire village.