[quote=@athanshadow]
Saying like "The old man talked to you." vs. "The old man talked to the travelers."
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[quote=@athanshadow]
Yes but you're still referring to us as if we are our characters when you earlier told us that we are to describe their actions instead of be inside their heads. 
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Oh yes, I'm in agreement with this.  It should be written in third person, at least now that we're past the opening post.