[quote=@Hantu Kongkek]
Gimme a few minutes, maybe a few hours. I'm going to tell you when you're wrong soon enough!
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I would be interested to hear your feedback on any way I can improve.

[quote=@rivaan]
[@Lugubrious] ohhh will remove it asap then ^_^' I don't own a console so I've never really played bayonetta mind you I've watched Let's play on the entire first game but haven't played it. As for the devil trigger well I can write it differently alright. Though considering the other examples of the skill like dante and virgil her demonic form will still be very human like. A thing of which I actually have a few pictures of how I imagine it. Even drew one, though can't upload it right now.
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No problem.  Looking forward to seeing what you've got.