[@Raijinslayer]

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All right, so Halvtand and I have discussed your character and because he's busy with stuff, you get my unsophisticated and primitive response rather than his finely worded stuff.

We would like to know what the point of him actually being born outside of Gobi is? You wrote it yourself, that he might as well have been born there … So why isn't/wasn't he?

What is the point of the “possible KG” you've got going here? What are your plans with this?

How was he so inherently good at blacksmithing that he could surpass his master by the time he was 15? How is one inherently good at anything, really, without the social/cultural aspect of it (as he did not grow up with his father, from whom he inherited this skill)?

How is one “[i]slender and lean[/i]" but at the same time have "[i]quite a bit of muscle in his upper body[/i]"? Is this just a wording mistake? Also, his height/weight ratio doesn't really seem to fit with the amount and type of muscle he would have build up by doing his blacksmithing. He should be heavier.

I wasn't aware that the amount of chakra a child possesses had something to do with how much their ancestors used theirs ...? Or was this not what you meant by:
“[i]Has rather large chakra reserves, courtesy of his mother's ninja blood and his father's side being intensive chakra users as well, even if it's not for combat[/i]”
If I misunderstood what you meant, please explain and/or elaborate.

Now, without knowing what kind of jutsu you want your character to have, I must say that this list I will now make does set off sirens in my head:
“[i]Above average Ninjutsu[/i]” - Better than your average chuunin.
“[i]Genjutsu rather difficult for him[/i]” - He finds the most difficult type of jutsu difficult.
“[i]Decent Taijutsu[/i]” - Which would be around average.
“[i]Rather skilled at Kenjutsu[/i]” - His main focus of combat
“[i]Knows some Fuuinjutsu[/i]” - That makes a total of 5 different types of jutsu.

Add to that:
A possible KG (making it 6 types)
Rather large chakra reserves
Inherited forging/blacksmithing abilities; so much that he is the best in the village

So... Do you see where my (our) concern lies?
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