Well, I just had an epiphany for my other character Chris, and I'd like some feedback. I've never had to write a power set that I made up. So I'm not sure if it even makes a lick of sense. Or makes sense but is completely redundant. (There is no such thing as an unwanted opinion. All thoughts are welcome. Especially the critical ones.) [hider=Christine Wilson][hr][hr][center][img]http://www.hypehair.com/wp-content/uploads/2015/06/kiersey6.jpg[/img][/center][hr][hr] [b]Character you have created:[/b] [indent]Christine Wilson[/indent] [b]Alias:[/b] [indent]Gargoyle[/indent] [b]Speech Color:[/b][indent][color=d1d0ce]Grey Goose, D1D0CE[/color][/indent] [b]Character Alignment:[/b] [indent]Hero[/indent] [b]Identity:[/b] [indent]Secret[/indent] [b]Character Personality:[/b][indent]???[/indent] [b]Uniform/costume:[/b] [indent]???[/indent] [b]Origin Info/Details:[/b][indent]???[/indent] [b]Hero Type:[/b][indent]Brick/Muscle / Shape Shifter[/indent] [b]Power Level:[/b] [indent](City or Street) Level[/indent] [b]Powers:[/b][indent][u]Gargoyle Form[/u][indent][i]Chris has the ability to turn herself into stone at will.[/i][list][*]Stone skin[list][*]When Chris transforms into stone she literally changes her skin into stone. This means her innards are still normal and not stone. When she talks about her ability she says she turns into stone, but that's not completely accurate.[/list][*]Stone Manipulation[list][*]Chris can take stone from existing statues or formations and add it to her body while she's in her Gargoyle form. She's able to dictate where it goes and what shape it will take. (See bullet point below)[/list][*]Morphing capabilities[list][*]While stone Chris can add more stone onto herself and use that stone to change her appearance. This can happen either by adding stone items such as arms, wings, armaments, etc. Or by making the stone make her look like someone else. Another way to think of it is that the new stone acts as a sort of second layer that she can manipulate at will within about a three to five foot radius (The radius is kind of malleable. EX: If she makes herself wings that can extend up to ten feet on each side she can maintain them even though they technically extend outside her radius. However in order to do so she'd have to sacrifice all her other additional stone to just concentrate on the wings. [/list][*]Increased Strength[list][*]While in her Gargoyle form Chris' strength is increased. She hasn't tested her upper limits but it appears to be about twice the normal human capacity. She can lift cars and hit hard enough to crack concrete.[/list][*]Increased resistance to injury[list][*]Chris can take a lot more damage than normal people while as Gargoyle. She's far more resistant to physical attacks and some magical attacks. However due to her squishy innards, anything that can pierce her stone skin is just as dangerous to her and normal humans. Also Chris doesn't have any healing factor. If she gets damaged, the damage remains even when she returns to her human form. She cannot use other stone to repair damage done. She can give the illusion it does (but it really doesn't do anything for her). EG: Chris loses an arm, she can make herself a new one, but when she drops the stone she still is missing an arm.[/list][/list][/indent][/indent] [b]Attributes:[/b] [indent]Strength Level: Normal Human/ 20 Speed/Reaction Timing Level: Normal Human Endurance at MAXIMUM Effort: Normal Human Agility: Normal Human Intelligence: Average Fighting Skill: Untrained[/indent] [b]Resources:[/b][indent]Minimal[/indent] [b]Weaknesses:[/b] [indent][u]Gargoyle Form[/u][indent][i]Weakness in her Gargoyle form[/i][list][*]Stone skin[list][*]Her innards are still normal and not stone. If there's an attack that can penetrate her stone skin it will do damage to her.[/list][*]Stone Manipulation[list][*]Chris can only work within a certain radius (3-5 feet) without sacrificing stone for showing off. Also the more bulk she adds on the less maneuverable she will be.[/list][*]Increased resistance to injury[list][*]Chris doesn't have any healing factor as Gargoyle. If she gets damaged, the damage remains even when she returns to her human form. She cannot use other stone to repair damage done. She can give the illusion it does (but it really doesn't do anything for her). EG: Chris loses an arm, she can make herself a new one, but when she drops the stone she still is missing an arm.[/list][/list][/indent][/indent][indent][u]Human Form[/u][indent][i]Weakness in her Human form[/i][list][*]Only Human[list][*]She's just a normal squishy human with all the weakness that come with it. You know what those are![/list][/list][/indent][/indent] [b]Supporting Characters:[/b][indent]-Mother -Father -Brother Eldest -Brother Older -Sister Older -? -?[/indent] [b]Do you know how to post pictures on RPG boards?:[/b] [indent][img]http://33.media.tumblr.com/b34439631e7bd4938bc7584f67244ff1/tumblr_nj4796h2H51rv2dduo4_250.gif[/img][/indent] [hider=Sample Post:](Minimum Four paragraphs containing dialogue. As this is an Advanced Level game, Sample must also meet the RPG forum's minimum requirement of 12 lines. Only for first time applicants.)[/hider][/hider] And now I'm in a conundrum. Run two characters or have a [i]fight to the death[/i] to see which one I should use? Hmmm.... decisions.