Wow. Ok. I'm not nitpicking, if I was I would have brought up maybe 10 more things, and had wick change her comment In our collab. As I said before and I'll say again I was giving the reason on why I didn't post last night, I wasn't attacking you. You don't have to bite back. I'm a very realistic writer ( or I try to be) I googled my character a lot (like where he was based what seal team is actually based there, how many years it has to be before he could become a lieutenant. What he is trained in, why he would be so far inland. ) I'm sorry that offends you but just so you know from now on I'm going to be like this. If your chapter does something that doesn't make sense to me I'm going to do my best to make it sound realistic for the both of us. It's just how I do things. Of course the Gm has a final say, but I'm not going to slack in my writing and my just to appease you. I actually want to become a better writer so I'm going to push myself.