[@Whimsley]

I personally thought it was more entertaining than a lot of the stuff I'd read prior. Very visually imaginative. I can see the red cloaked dude with the wide hat and mask hop across the empty space of the dull-grey steel of the hold atop enemies that were trying to reach him. This is particularly the kind of stuff I like to see because it's more specific and fun to read. I guess as [@tex] said gotta keep the krunklites in mind.