[quote=@Krinos Solstice] [@Zarkun] I don't mind him using a gunblade, but due to lack of any real professionals in Tormin when it comes to physical fighters, he's going to have to be clumsy with the weapon. Also, he wouldn't have been accepted into RSG at twelve, that's a little too young to be a soldier. Enlistment/conscription age is 16 at minimum, unless he was forced into the RSG beforehand, which is rare. In Avenase it's commonplace due to the poor living conditions and such, but Tormin has practically no poor people. [@zaga2575] Knew you were going Lancer, I was prepared for it. Just one little flaw I saw, if Kessig used to be an Imperial soldier and was born and raised in the Empire, then his Origin needs to change to Avenase, as that's where he's from. Loyalty is alright, I mean, Luna gives orders to the RSG, so it works fine for me. I like the idea of him helping a mage, and in turn, the mage teaching him magic. A very intuitive idea. Anyways, just fix his Origin and add in for his Rank: Luna Bladedancer's Elite Guard. Once done, go ahead and place him in the Character tab. [/quote] Right, I actually put that he joined at 18 in the backstory, though I can change that to be more accurate to the actual age.