[@fdeviant] [@Tearstone] [@Gowi] So a quick comment rundown on the Lore Doc. To those not on a computer or unable to currently view the doc. [color=39b54a]Pharmakeia[/color] Fdeviant, is it alright if I added the herb Moly, which appeared in Book 10 of the Odyssey to this section? It has already appeared in the IC and there is not really a good place for it anywhere else in this document. ~[color=39b54a]Dedonus[/color] [color=39b54a]Evocation - Tearstone[/color] [color=39b54a]FDeviant [/color] Same concern here, as traditionally evocation is the summoning of spirits, demons, mystical forces. Your form of evocation has some overlap with the Arcane Stream system and it might be better to just lob this under what is possible using the Arcane Stream. Reply•Resolve VATROU Would Elemetalism be better fitting? 2:44 PM Today•Edit•Delete FDeviant I think that sounds better, personally. 2:56 PM Today Fallen Reaper Ummm... Guys, you realize you're sort of discussing things without the official creator and already sounds like you're already making changes without consent. This isn't making me very comfortable at all to be honest if that's what you're doing. My suggestion: Contact Tearstone with a shout out over the OoC and/or PM about this stuff first before officially making changes or discussing them. This includes Gowi. They might have reasons for how they formatted them which aren't in the descriptions. 3:43 PM Today (edited 3:46 PM Today) VATROU Well I have no intention of changing anything the creators made. I'm just thinking in the comment bubble here. I wonder though, do you get these messages in email? 3:53 PM Today•Edit•Delete Fallen Reaper No as this is a public link. If it was private and send invite, yes I would. I'm also reminding everyone and pointing out what it looked like to me. I didn't think you two intended on altering anything which why I stated 'if that's what you're doing' because I've been known to be mistaken before. However what I said in the OoC is very true and important for everyone, including myself, to keep in mind. It also opens the door for the creator to gain ideas or input over their creation as long as we keep in mind the original creator has final say over it. 3:57 PM Today [color=39b54a]Thaumaturgy - Tearstone FDeviant[/color] Historically speaking, Thaumaturgy and Theurgy are highly religious forms of practice related to priests and a sense of catharsis, whereas sympathetic magic (the form of magic that relates two parts to a whole), and pors pro toto (part for whole), were just magical concepts employed by any number of magical practices. Being that this is a fantasy setting, we can redefine terms as much as we want, but it might be to this lore's benefit to have a clear definition of Thaumaturgy. (But obviously a lot of stuff in here is WIP, so this is just a suggestion)