[@Hexaflexagon]
Looks good to me as well. No character picture? The last sentence of the first spirit doesn't have a punctuation mark. Other than that, all good!

[@Vox][@Rockette][@smarty0114][@icmasticc][@Redrum][@ZB1996][@FantasyChic][@Anima][@Ozerath][@DJAtomika][@Hexaflexagon]

Okay, this is going to seem harsh, but I've been cuddly with people in the past and it amounts to nothing at all.

I realize that my last post sucked and didn't give much direction at all, so I'll give some in this post instead. That being said, Me and [@Rockette] are not going to pester people for posts or activity. We are simply going to mark you as inactive when we determine that you're no longer around. Neither of us will be 'mad', as you are welcome back at anytime, but coming back only to be inactive again and again is not going to sit well with anyone.

However, if you are active with every intention to post, but don't know what to say in the OOC, say this:

[u][i][b]The Wicked Witch of the West went her own way[/b][/i][/u]

Just copy and paste it into a post here, so that we know you're still around. It's infinitely better than promising posts that come a week later or not at all.

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This story requires players to take action. You can't just react to things, you have to act as well. However, as I said, my last post didn't do much in terms of guidance, so I'll do it here instead. 

◇ Nexus Reactor Mission: You reach this mission by land vehicles, which can be whatever you choose to describe. Once there, you will discover that it's basically a Mordrem hive at this point. Rockette has a character in this mission, so a lot of the specifics will be determined by her instead of me.

◇ Doral Mission: The Oakridge has a displacement device deep within the academy. You go there and teleport to Doral. When you get there, you basically have to ask around for deserters. Me and Rockette will help by controlling NPCs.

◇ Hammer Mission: Land vehicles, same as the Reactor mission. It will basically be a bunch of mini-missions at the front. Mostly involving fighting, but also dealing with civilians and soldiers.

◇ Kinabalu Mission: Most of you who are doing this one are on point. Describing the actual flight isn't necessary. We will land at the base of the mountain on the east end, near the sea. There could be a village there, wherein you can converse with people and learn about what has been going on in the mountains.