I think that all of the Weapons are a little too powerful. If shes limited a little weapon-wise, she should be good. Make sure that cores arent her usual fighting style, either. We already have enough people with expertise on cores.

On the subject of the writing sample, I think you could do a lot better. If you really want to join this RP, Id like to see a better sample. You seem to have a lot of run-ons and comma splices. Plus, you dont need a colon ( : ) whenever your character speaks. There are also little typing errors. I dont know if that was just rushed typing, a special condition, or small mistakes. All Im asking for is just more effort grammar and writing wise.