[quote=@LoneSilverWolf] [@Natsucooldude] Wow, there is so much wrong with those two sentences it's not even funny. FIRST of all, just because it's not "the third-person writing style everyone else is using" does not make it wrong. So effing what? If everyone here on the guild decides to drink bleach all at once, are you gonna do it? HELL no. SECOND of all, who the hell are you to judge her post? Unless the GM complains about her writing style, it's none of your damn business. Why you being such a judgemental jack@$$? THIRDLY, it's people like YOU that make everyone else so damn afraid to take a step into the advanced section. I *AM* an advanced writer, I have written two full length manuscripts that I intend to try and publish, AND I have been through so many high school and college writing classes I can't count them all--and got straight A's in every last one of them. And I can say, A Tattooed Girl's writing style is just fine. In fact, it is very excellent and detailed, which is far more than I can say for judgemental little @$$es like yourself usually. So you need to take a step back and ask yourself why the hell you are being such a jerk. There is absolutely nothing wrong with writing in the first person for RP. I mix it up, writing in both perspectives. Some RPs I will go traditional, others I will go first person. Just because it's different doesn't make it wrong. That is the mentality that makes our world such an effed up place and it's crap that there's people like that here. Oh well. Don't listen to this guy, A Tattooed Girl, keep doing what you are doing. [/quote] Whoa there. You can check in your Doctorate in English Literature at the door buddy. No need to go on a burning crusade. First person is an usual way to present in a roleplay filled with third person, and a bit clunky at time stylistically when transitioning from another roleplayer's use of Third.