[@ira1999] Okay, it looks like a decent character but there a couple of problems. Know you are new here, so no worries and I'll help you through that. 

First, please reread the rules.

 The CS code I provided has to be used for this Rp. Also, you need to contact a mod and have them delete the post entirely from the cs tab. (You can do this by going to the suggestions and bug part of the forum and creating a topic titled delete post. Then linking them to your post) Only approved cs's are allowed in the cs tab, all cs's must be posted in the ooc first and await approval before they can be moved to the cs tab. (It's a general rule most gm's follow on the forum.) 

The cs code provides part of the requirements, the rules provide the rest. Things like where to post the cs, how much depth is required for the history and such.

- Not mad, I have done the same when I joined the forum, tool getting used to. So don't fret, I'll help you through it. ^^