[quote=@RedXCross]
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 Looks mostly good on my end, except for the "preachy" aspect. He's probably been mostly quiet about everything since this venture started. I'm under the assumption that it would take a crowbar to get him to even start talking about all this when he's barely processing it himself...

 
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Apologies, I don't know where I got that from! In my head you said he liked to talk about the sun a lot but I can't find that in the CS anywhere. I'm just a crazypants, let me know if the edit looks better!