[@MonsieurShade]
So! I'm working on my post right now (and I'm hoping to have it up before lunch), but I was wondering - do you want to draw out any interaction between Picard and Cain, or no? Because Picard has to walk back to the castle as well, and there's only so many routes to take, they're pretty much walking together. For now I won't have Picard speaking to Cain, so it's up to you if you want to just gloss over their journey to the castle or not.