[@Gunther] Maybe it's not so much the number of paragraphs as it is the length of them. I was mobile when I posted that, so everything looked a lot longer than it was. In your case, with the one with like 15 paragraphs, you had several people all reacting to the same thing, so [i]technically[/i] it was only 4-5 paragraphs long. Overall your paragraphs have been pretty easy to read, and it's all stuff that's happening currently. I'm talking a bit more about [@DeepestApology].

[@Treue] [i]Roleplay here if you enjoy writing at least a paragraph or two, character development, and some depth. Grammar and spelling are encouraged. Generally one paragraph (a few sentences) per post.[/i]

Sure there's no "hard max," but there's a general max. We're obviously way above the number of sentences per paragraph, but 10-20 paragraphs is, well, ridiculous. I joined a Casual RP, not just because I liked the story, setting and premise, but because it was Casual. I enjoy writing "at least a paragraph or two" and 4-5 paragraphs at the most (for high casual, anyway). Not only is 10+ paragraphs hard to keep up with, it makes me look (and feel) like I'm a lazy writer. 
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A few suggestions to other writers, in regard to my journal/diary suggestion:

[@DeepestApology] In your (first post), you could turn the second paragraph into a journal entry. Not that your character needs to write in an actual journal; it could be memories or thoughts he's having, because it's mostly backstory.

[@Section] Your entire first and third paragraph could be journal entries. They're all history and memories, and you could remove both of them without having a significant impact on the current story. I personally think it'd help to have them in hider tags as either an entry or a memory/thought your character is having, because it makes it easier to catch up to your character if I or someone else need to go back and refresh what happened last time.