[@Zorogami] Personally, I like that idea, but you might want to wait for some other people to post their CSes so you can collab with them. But I don't think your reason for joining the Convoy has to be to in depth, it can be as simple as just wanting to go to Angel City because you're tired of Eden or something of the like... it doesn't have to be super thought out, it just has to make some level of sense. I don't want this aspect being something that holds up people from making cool characters like the one you described, so don't get discouraged

[@Treue] The immediate problem I notice with your CS is that it does not include why she is joining the convoy. Like I said above, it can be simple, it just has to make some level of sense. Also, I will say, I'm not a fan of characters with tragic backstories that don't have proper mental repercussions when you roleplay them in IC, so just keep that in mind.