It's cool, no rush! ^.^ 

I am just slaving away to homework for now. I have so much today it's not even been funny! I started homework around 11 AM and while I have taken about three hour long breaks, I am still going even now. Its currently 9 o'clock for me now. Blah! Seven hours... 

I think biting her neck will make it more engaging and meaningful. However, you should do what you think Devin would do. ^.^ Its really nice how we bounce off of each other in our writing! We move quickly when we need to but nothing ever feels forced. Even though they are going to kiss on their second day of knowing each other, I still do not feel like it is rushed. I do not know how our writing together flows so well, but I love it!! :D It's okay, I do not think she is expecting him to believe her yet. It will take time.

Again, no rush. Just get to it when you can :)