[quote=@Treue] [@Inuyasha] I knew I was forgetting something. Anyway, the death of her parents will have its effects on her psyche, don't worry about that. I'll get to work on fixing that though. Everything else good? [hr] EDIT: Fixed that up. [/quote] It still just tells me she heard of a convoy being formed, I want to know [i]why[/i] she decided to join this convoy. Again, could be any reason, maybe she's just looking for adventure -- just as long as it works. Also, just wanted to say when I read you other section it made me laugh, I dont really know why.