[@foxygen] haha that's usually me unless I have a miraculous moment of inspiration ie. This last post XD
They'll probably calm a bit when characters start interacting more and have less of other stuff to add. If you wanted to PM it to me to look over and give you ideas on how to extend it if I can think of any I'd be totally ok with that but only if doing so will make you feel better or more assured your post is fine but I bet you'll be fine without help anyway ;)