[@CourierSix] Excellent read. I knew when I read your bio for Raguel, I would not like him. You have done an excellent job at developing that image. I assume this is your intention. I like how he was able to  read body language to discern the true leader. Well done. Observe the group and then act after all intelligence has been gathered.

On another note, I will not seek our your mistakes, even those quickest to point everyone's mistakes create them. If you want my advice about your writing, ask me and I will respond in a PM so that no one else may read them. That is unnecessary.

I enjoyed reading what you wrote. Keep it up. I would imagine Gregory Bainbridge, Joe Filion and company may one day come in conflict with Raguel Reid.