Okay, what I'm going to say here counts for both the labours and RPGC's. I'm getting disheartened and this is because the number of times I get feedback with the advice to proofread my entries. I do that! Always! I read over them several times. This one I also let someone else read and he only pointed out one sentence that had to be reworded, but my English is probably better than his. 

Please, everyone, if you see bad grammar, spelling mistakes, awkward sentences, typo's, I need people to go over them with me. I don't know what I do wrong and I don't feel like I'm improving at all in this aspect. 


[@Terminal]I went back to the entry and read it again. I still don't see the mistakes you found. I'm sorry. If I repeated the same mistakes, I probably think they are correctly used. Just like I can't find the words I spelled properly but used incorrectly. I know that in the past you let an entry of mine pass because it met your standards, but just barely and the seventh labour was also grudgingly passed by RomanAria because of the grammar. Do you think I have what it takes to compete in the next labours? Because I feel after all the RPGC's and Labours, I didn't improve much grammar-wise, seeing how often I see the same kind of feedback return.


Also, congratulations [@Holmishire], now you carry the torch alone. Keep up your winning streak!