Hey, don't worry about it. I'll let you know if anything's out of place out anything.

And I'm impressed with your dedication to exceed dyslexia. My girlfriend has dyslexia and my own reading skills are pretty poor (though that might just be me). So I totally understand from where you're coming. ^^

As for the history: as long as everything is there that you think needs to be there, you're fine. It can be all bullets and cliff notes for all I care. xP
But I'll certainly provide feedback! :D
And, from what I can tell, your writing level is fine. ^^