[quote=@Leslie Hall] [img]http://i.imgur.com/bJcII6E.gif[/img] [img]http://i.imgur.com/ySDkC87.gif[/img] I would bring them in, but after having had a chance to read through my characters during my break at work I've came to the conclusion that I don't particularly like a lot of things about the CS's. Some of it to do with format, but mostly just to do with the way I explained things back then? I feel like I wasn't as mindful about certain aspects of them. I'm really not happy with Vera and Axel mostly. I can't really say what I was thinking when I wrote them because it was months ago now, but they just feel so... thrown into things? All in all I just find the characters I wrote so long ago to be rather weak in terms of personality and backstory. Even some of their magic is explained poorly and lacks sufficient detail (at least to me). If I'm allowed to by the GM's, I think I'd like to take this opportunity and rehash the characters entirely. I might still keep their general concepts, maybe tweak or change their magics around to something less... dumb. Basically I kinda feel like I can do better? Actually get some genuine characters ready to be introduced for the next Arc. Of coarse this is hardly an epiphany. I did write them nearly 5 months ago now. My writing has changed and my own personal standard of what I consider acceptable has changed. I'm rambling... TL:DR The characters I wrote disappoint me and if it's alright I'd like to offer them an exclusive make over in this weeks episode of 'Pimp My OC'. [/quote] I have no qualms, but there's something I like about your two Phoenix Wing members that makes me miss them already.