Here's my character submission. Let me know if anything needs to be tweaked or fixed; also, I kind of didn't really have any ideas I thought would make a good Gift of Rebirth, so I sort of just copied your character's with a focus towards the arcane magics rather than holy ones. If that's not cool just let me know and I'll try to think of something else (open to suggestions btw).

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[color=royalblue][b][NAME][/b][/color]
[indent]Xega[/indent]
[color=royalblue][b][ORIGIN][/b][/color]
[indent]Xir[/indent]
[color=royalblue][b][AGE][/b][/color]
[indent]Early Twenties[/indent]
[color=royalblue][b][APPEARANCE][/b][/color]
[indent]Xega, as a studious mage of one of the most prestigious academies of Xir--though he can't remember which one--has the frail form one would associate with such. At a height of five feet and eleven inches, he stands just short of the standard many might consider "manly," but then most mages weren't concerned with such matters of primitive brawn. He barely weighs one hundred and forty pounds, and has woman-like features especially about his face and slender, nimble fingers. Currently, immediately after his Rebirth, his eyes bear deep lines beneath them and his cheeks are sunken; his illustrious, deep purple hair is now messy and looks as if it hadn't been washed in days.[/indent]
[color=royalblue][b][PERSONALITY][/b][/color]
[indent]Xega is self-centered and arrogant, and considers himself an intellectual only concerned with his pursuits of arcane mystery. He finds such things as physical strength and athleticism to be beneath him, and considers those who would employ such against him to be barbarians--and yet, like any man of the mind, he finds himself infuriatingly helpless against such overpowering brawn. Xega cannot stand not knowing the answer to a question, and will maddeningly seek a solution with relentless zeal. His excitement can be contagious, as despite his normal introversion, if he can connect with someone about his studies he becomes much more personable.[/indent]
[color=royalblue][b][SKILLS & TALENTS][/b][/color]
[indent][b]Skilled Magician[/b] - Xega was a graduate student of his academy, pursuing research and conducting experiments alongside some of the finest minds of Xir. As such, his command of the arcane arts is considerably mighty.
[b]Fulgurmancy[/b] - Xega's preferred forms of battlecraft, the magics of conflict, involves the use of controlled lightning. With it he can produce bolts or streams of white hot lightning to electrocute and scorch his enemies. The short lived nature of lightning, however, makes it hard to use defensively or to maintain a spell for long periods.
[b]Sharp Mind[/b] - As one who has researched and studied for such a large portion of his life, and being naturally intelligent and inquisitive, Xega is equipped to handle many a mystery or mental puzzle with relative ease.[/indent]
[color=royalblue][b][INVENTORY][/b][/color]
[indent][b]Wizard's Staff[/b] - A hardwood staff of about six feet, its last third of length seemingly naturally grown into the shape of a plaited braid. It curls slightly, forming a hook onto which to attach Xega's magus foci. The staff itself merely provides a means of gesture and focus, as well as a last line of defense. Runes are etched into its surface, their protective wards being the only thing that kept the staff from being stolen from his corpse.
[b]Crystal Lantern[/b] - This shining brass lantern holds within it a crystal of condense arcane power, which serves as a collector of ambient magical energies and a focus for Xega to use to reduce the strain on himself when channeling the Arcane Stream. Its magics are bonded specifically to Xega himself, making it useless to anyone else, and some of the same runes that protected the staff protected it as well.
[b]Book Satchel[/b] - Once, this satchel held Xega's tomes of sorcery. They have been looted from his former corpse, however, all but one--a basic textbook that was already far outdated in Xega's own time, and is now so dry rotted and yellowed as to be practically illegible.[/indent]
[color=royalblue][b][GIFT OF REBIRTH][/b][/color]
[indent][b]Arcane Conduit[/b] - A gift that can only be from Arcanus himself, Xega will find that his body can far exceed the capacity of any normal mage to channel the Arcane Stream directly through himself. Though using such enormous power strains him significantly, even burning through his substantial mental stamina after it finishes with his frail physical body, it allows him feats of magic that no other magi could perform. He has yet to know or understand his capabilities, and like most redeemers, he cannot trigger it at will.[/indent]
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