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[hider=Faith 'Archangel' Connors] 
Name: Faith 'Archangel' Connors
Role: [b][i]The Sharpshooter[/i][/b]
D.O.B.: 13/01/12
Height: 5'10
Weight: 136 lbs
Nationality: Irish
Appearance: [hider=without gear] [img]http://i.imgur.com/BuVHGdn.jpg[/img] [/hider]
[hider=With gear] [img]http://i.imgur.com/QfdSAV8.png[/img][/hider]
Background: Faith was born in Ireland on friday the 13th of January 2012, to Kate and Kyle Connors. Her Father was a Cop within Dublin, while her mother stayed at home to look after Faith. Around her 13th birthday, Faith's father was killed during protests against the Irish Government cutting police jobs, they were peacefully protesting to keep their jobs when tear gas was thrown and guns were fired and many lay dead or dying in the streets.

It was due to this catastrophic event that she decided to join the police when she turned 18. Her Mother and her self moved to Neo-Bay, one of the few cities in america to still have a Police Force. She gave her CV in the Office but found out a day later that it was due to shut down. It was as she was leaving that she was pulled to the side by a strange man and offered a position as part of C.O.P.S
Theme Song: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SzmUde_EK5Y [/hider]
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Is that A KATANNA ON THE BACK OF THE GEAR??!

But seriously I would ask that maybe you give your CS another look over.

I'm finding it hard to believe with someone with so little experience would be an effective sharpshooter and be drafted to the cops. I don't see anything about any training apart from a failed application to the police.

Also the timeline doesn't make sense. When she was 18 the year would have been 2030 but the precinct in neo bay shut down in 2027.

Also the Background is just way too short in general, if you look at some of the other submissions thats the size and detail of background I'm looking for.

But I do like your character concept, a young cute plucky sniper from Ireland, maybe she could have been a military cadet? and she didn't necessarily have to have contact or experience with the police to be eligible. Please read the world brief and time line thoroughly and see if you can come up with something.