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Name: Chen Dong Wu
Age: (Minimum 16): 16
Gender:  Female 
Universal Disciplines Mastered: (Up to 4 to start)

Nexus: Can survive for extended periods in high heat and bitter cold.

Sixth Sense: Costing a good deal of physical endurance, the user can determine if there is any danger in the present situation that could occur in the next hour. However, this is not an in-depth description, only a general feeling of when, where and who is in trouble. 

Psi-screen: The user can use this if they anticipate a mental attack, and also to block and telepathy if they're not in the mood to listen.

Have you chosen your set?: Fighter
If so, Set Disciplines Mastered: (Up to 2 to start, 1 if you have 4 Universal.) 

Pressure: If a Warrior loses his weapon, they should be lucky to have mastered this Discipline. Warriors are taught of Pressure Points, parts on the human body that when struck, produce more pain than an arrow to the knee.

Weary Fighter: If a Warrior is caught while tired, they can enter a different meditative state that ignores all feelings of soreness in their body. However, when they stop, the feeling returns, along with any other soreness gained from during the state.

Gear: Kasaya like clothing/robbing (deep red), Holy Symbol of protection, Poetry Book, Prayer Beads, Five sticks of incense, a water skin, belt pouch, a rabbit’s foot, scroll of pedigree

History:  Chen had originally came from a small warrior family. Belonging to the Wu clan and being in service of their lord. Instead of living a rather easy and well pampered life similar to that of a noble child along with well education, tragedy quickly struck. It seemed their lord had rather betrayed allies and brought shame on everyone. The family was devastated and shaved their heads in shame before becoming nomads and trying to live a more pious life. Traveling the lands, struggling and training out in the wilderness and begging honorably to the travelers that were come across for donation, which did not end well. Until rather the family devoted themselves to a deity of good fortune and protection upon travelers.

It seemed rather effective as the goddess had heard back. The next day rabbits and birds had become plentiful in the wilderness in hunt. From the event Chen had rather kept a bunny’s foot to remind herself of the event. The goddess had shined fortune open her yet again as later around the age of ten she had been found along the roads and chosen. Chosen to become a warrior, a peacekeeper really. The opportunity seemed to be heaven’s scent and a way to better the family’s name, so Chen was quickly sent off to the training grounds. Having been there and training herself and defenses ever sense, on top of some of the small training she had when she was a child. 
Other: Prefers hand to hand

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Sorry, but i will have to deny this for now.

Why does she have a holy symbol? A poetry book? "Prayer beads"? Whats with all the incense? Why is the pedigree scroll important? Why was Chen's family to share the shame of their master's choice? Also, Peacekeepers dont start until 16. Lastly, your cloak can't be red until you gain more universal disciplines. With the amount she has mastered now, her cloak would be orange.

Explain all this first, please.