[@Kurai Assassin] much better! I ask that you look over some minor grammar and spelling but it looks good.

Also as far as the gear goes, a yellow and purple halo suit with a katanna on the back really doesn't fit this RP

If you need some sniper suit picture concepts I think something like this would fit much better


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