[quote=@Hael] I would love to see the Ogre King. In fact, Vulamera will probably interact with him. So that's a bonus if you feel like having some more tension on the Zephyrion-Vulamera level. If you don't mind my asking, what is it that you liked about the post? I honestly hated my parts. I felt so amatuer. Not my best work :lol (the others did wonderfully, however :golfclap) [/quote] The part inside Vakarlon's mind was what I liked. I'm not sure if you wrote most of it, Mardox did, or you two worked together, but in any case it had solid imagery and symbolism. You know I adore that stuff. :lol The end felt somewhat rushed, though don't take that for me saying it was of lesser quality. It's understandable that you hastened that section to actually get the post up within any reasonable amount of time. As in for the ogre king, you already have seen him a bit. He's the first ogre that was made and the biggest one, and also the one that smashed Astarte's rock. In doing so he absorbed 1 Might and became a hero that can use Astartian magic like Ventus. He would gladly talk to Vulamera or any other god for that matter, and she might like him because he's unlike most other mortals (especially most of his own kind) in that he intensely craves knowledge.