[quote=@MiddleEarthRoze]
Only just saw this now: as I'm not a GM, I can't really dictate to you what should be changed, but hopefully we can come to an agreement.
I love the character, but yes, I do think she is far too similar to Nightingale. Both in terms of skills and powers. Again, I can't force you to change her things, but perhaps a bit of tweaking may be necrssary to find more significant differences beteren the two.
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Do you have any ideas because I can't see a way of changing it without just changing her powers?

[quote]Also - these are just a few discrepancies I picked up on while reading - you've stated at one point that her mother was Russian, and at another that she was English.[/quote]

Thanks for pointing it out, I changed a little of the back story late on and I was a little out of it yesterday

[quote]I'm also confused as to how she's picked up that many languages so fluently - not just because of her age, but the fact she's been in a mental hospital for so long. Crazy houses don't give language lessons, from what I know.[/quote]

My belief is due to the fact that she was in contact with a large number of people from different nationalities during her childhood. Children that are raised learning more than one language have a much higher affinity to learn more especially if they pick these up while they are young but I can tone it down