Explained/Replied to everything here.[@Sigil] [hider] [quote]Strength: 13, Weight: 145, Swim: Can swim without hindrance, including while in light armor and with pack. Nuh-uh. [/quote] Switched stats around to 15 strength to have him swim unhindered like Kyra. [quote]The ability "Heroic Wind" sounds heavily exploitable. "Quick with his strikes, and only becomes faster and more skilled as the fight lengthens." Is there precedent for this ability elsewhere? Are there limitations to this ability, or does he become a combat deity if a fight goes long enough? If this is similar to a Berserker's Rage ability, it can be worked with.[/quote] Yes, it's like Berserker's rage. Won't last for long and he will tire out. I would like help with those mechanics if you could. He just gets more used to the rhythm of combat as it goes. [quote]"Hide: When holding still with minimal coverage or in shadows you will go unnoticed if someone tries to spot you." Does this account for his armor?[/quote] He only has a chain shirt and forest colored camouflaged clothing. [quote]"Magical Item, Ocarina: Blessed by being dipped into Phelqwyn's glade waters." What does this confer to the Ocarina? Is it what gives the Ocarina its "Serene Music" spell? Or is the spell something he knows and can perform with any, mundane instrument? [/quote] He can only do it with the Ocarina. [quote]"Spell: Sense taint: Can sense the presence of undead, vampires, and dark sorcery (vaguely) by his cursed arm throbbing. Makes his arm slightly weakened (initially, perhaps for a post or two)." Is this automatic, or must it be checked for? What are the limitations to this power? And what is considered "Dark Sorcery" for the purposes of this power? [/quote] I edited it. Dark Sorcery meant curses. And Lady A would tell me whether or not he'd be weakened from it/ if he could sense anything. [quote]The curse on his arm: It is destroyed, as per character history, but still gives him magical powers. Is there a downside? Is this treated as a magical item?[/quote] The effects of the curse that would kill him were nulled, but the cursed mark is stuck there. [quote]Guaren Juice and Lantern Leaf: What are the purposes of these items?[/quote] One tastes good and the other is used like a torch. [quote]You have listed ability with a Shield, Sword & Shield Style, Dagger, Mace, and Spear. Is it an oversight that he has no direct Sword skill? [/quote] Oversight. Pardon me. Edited. [quote]I'm a little fuzzy on his "Far Leap" ability. I'd prefer it if there were some specifics involved, including differences between armored/encumbered vs. unarmored/unencumbered. If this ability is taken from an existing game or handbook, I'd love it if the source were cited. Also, is this variable, dependent upon his Strength stat? [/quote] More of a character trait than something that would help him in any situation to flesh him out, but you're right it needs to fit in the RP mechanics so if you or Lady A want it gone, then no problem. However using other characters as references, I was under the impression the stats were semi loose like how skills are semi vague, and we could have unique strengths with unique characters. Like in [url=http://www.roleplayerguild.com/topics/89276-duplicity-d-d-style-fantasy-rp-adventure/char#post-3200493]Lucas character sheet[/url] having 'balance' and 'escape artist' despite having a relatively low Dexterity of 12. Or [url=http://www.roleplayerguild.com/posts/3207119]Saul's character sheet[/url] of having a charisma of 11 but being a leader or a charmer when he needs to be. But like I said, just say the word and it can be gone. Just how I envisioned Calanon in my head, is all. Thanx for reading btw [/hider]