[quote=@Belwicket] Yeah but Pezz hasn't been on you to make them longer. [/quote] Ah. Well, in a statement half aimed at IcePezz, as long as your posts add a solid direction to where your character is going, the lengths are fine. Longer is a nice thing to have, but don't push yourself to add artificial length when a statement can be well put in shorter words. What I will say about your latest post is that it can be expanded to include some info about what collapsed on the way there - make it up, eh?- as I was imagining when the ceiling fell that there would be a somewhat big mess. I left that a little vague to be expanded upon to give the room a bit more of an image to those looking at it. [hr] In general; Jon, Viet, Zero's up. If you don't have too much to add at the moment, there's room for talking about the scene itself (the room's left a bit vague, and there's still a big hole in the floor), possibly a search for some of the servants to help or otherwise try and get in the room to clear out some of the mess/help with the situation. [@RokkuHoshi], didn't forget ya - having a chat with 'Pezz at present.