God damn that was a lot of attention to detail.  I'll try and fix it up later today.  You weren't kidding about those "legendary checks."  I also wouldn't say that he's exactly a "friendship is the key to victory", but he would just rather prefer it to be that way, y'know what I mean?  I was kind of going for a innocent sort of character having to harden up to the world ahead, since there is a lot of militarized things going on.