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Name
Pyth Tanzini
(Pie-th)

Gender
Male

Race - Division
Freomlorn - The Jyual

Age
27

Birthplace
Just outside the kings palace because his mother was trying to get to his father who was in the palace before she gave birth.

Affiliation
He is a strong follower of the king.

Appearance
http://imgur.com/CSNRblU 
Face: http://imgur.com/wO1lwgH (ignore red pupil thing and weird metal glove and ignore the advertising it isent a girl XD)
Face is one of the normal Jyual. Short Dark brown hair. Stern facial expressions all the time.

Affiliation Gear
Shown in picture. Two-handed long sword. As well as Extra strong forearm guards used for parrying attacks.

Affiliation Regiment - Rank
The Royal Expeditionary Force - Justicar

Personality
Stern and disciplined (As far as you know) Always serious and never has his guard down. He is kind to only his very very favorites and is extremely respectful (most of the time) [This is literally all there is to it to my character. He is just a very stern person I dont know what else you want me to right]

Background
Rough, Tough childhood like everyone this day and age. His dad was a Royal lancer and taught his thoroughly with a lance he is very skilled in lancing however he like his long sword better and more or less taught himself how to wield it and doesn't use any traditional methods of attack or defense. He grew up surrounded by the Royal Guard and knows his in's and out's. His mom died giving birth so he has never experienced love. He is a hard person with a headstrong personality that always gets the job done. His left leg was cut when he was in battle and very young it has healed well but its not the same. [All there is to it. Nothing noteworthy other than this]

Affiliates
Mom - Deceased
Dad - Deceased (Killed in battle few years ago) 
All of his dads Lancing Regiment - Some alive some dead
Most soldiers under-ranking him - most alive (Pyth deals with rowdy trainees, along with Co-Commanding a Regiment)

Strengths
Unconventional Long Sword wielder (fights by his own style which surprises most enemys)
Professional Lancer (Very skilled with Lances and Javelins)
Incredible Stamina (from swinging his sword around so much he can fight for very long periods of time)

Weaknesses
Left leg is weaker than right. Uses right leg as plant foot almost every time he fights
Always seems distant. never has anything to fight for. seems like he fights halfhearted even though he wins his duels.
Has bad eyesight. He can only see blurs about 20 yards out. (doesn't effect sword fighting but he cant see an archers ambush for example)


Character Theme
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cI7OtmHGHQk (this is usually what his mind wanders off and thinks about during training or battles that he is winning to easily)


[color=6ecff6]Tell my how it looks now.[/color]
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I'll do a proper read through in a few hours.