[@Eviledd1984] Main issue: You have three thaumaturgy abilities (those are your raven spells) and one gift. That's not allowed. You can only have 3 thaumaturgy abilities or 3 martial arts or 1 gift. So, either remove the spells, or remove the gift.

Other issues: 
1: Your third spell might be a bit too powerful. Disregard this issue if you plan to remove your spells.
2: Your character concept should only have 1 sentence. I recommend at least changing that "however" into a "but" (Me being a Grammar Nazi).
3: Your backstory is a little short. It could definitely be extended a bit, at least by one line, and by line, I don't mean sentence; I mean typing enough so that your words begin moving downward. Also, remove the words "Tell us about yourself. What did you do in your Earthly life? How do you feel about your death? What are your plans for the future?" from there. You don't need that there and you should have removed it.
4: Put some spaces between your sentences, man, and try not to make typos with the commas. Proofreading is very important.  I can understand if you have issues with your keyboard or if English is not your first language or something, in which case you are free to ask other people for help and take their advice (me included).