My only gripes with the character is that Reachman names, of which the Forsworn is made up of, are pseudo-Celtic/Gaelic in nature. Take Brynnen-i-Cael or Madanach, for instance. One, my character's, name is pseudo-Celtic and the other is pseudo-Scots-Gaelic, I believe. I'll link you to a site with a lot of female Gaelic and Celtic names.