[quote=@Leoven] Yooooo. It's like super late right now and my cs is still a work in progress (her freaking bio is a mess) but I think it's easy enough to get a general grasp on her. She's a glass cannon and will probably betray her friends... probably. [@Morpheus297] tell me if there's anything to change. I'll elaborate on the strengths/weaknesses plus other parts tomorrow, but I wasn't sure about the general gist with the gang. [hider=Tori (wip)] [center][img]http://66.media.tumblr.com/51408aefe57dfe9cdf0a6b1f1cb910d0/tumblr_inline_nqtuoinUfQ1rpdlxb_500.gif[/img][/center] [b][u][color=ff7f50]N A M E:[/color][/u][/b] [indent]Victoria "Tori" Bauman[/indent] [b][u][color=ff7f50]A P P E A R A N C E:[/color][/u][/b] [indent]wip[/indent] [b][u][color=ff7f50]P E R S O N A L I T Y:[/color][/u][/b] [indent][i]+Adaptable +Dynamic +Persuasive -Compulsive -Fickle -Impatient[/i][/indent] [indent]wip[/indent] [b][u][color=ff7f50]G A N G:[/color][/u][/b] [indent]The Wreckers[/indent] [b][u][color=ff7f50]J O B:[/color][/u][/b] [indent]College Student (Undeclared) | Part-time Mechanic[/indent] [b][u][color=ff7f50]B I O G R A P H Y:[/color][/u][/b] [indent]Victoria Bauman was born and raised in Meridia. In her nineteen years of existence, the maze-like alleys and the scrapyard became her home, and she knew their nooks and crannies like the back of her hand.[/indent] [indent]Aside from the ongoing war between the different gangs controlling parts of the city, Tori has always seen Meridia as a somewhat bland place. It was no small town, but the boring atmosphere remained like a stifling poison cloud. Tori could count on one hand the number of times she'd truly found herself excited while roaming the city and one of those had been when she finally learned how to drive. Yes, nothing much happened in the life of one Tori Bauman. Her parents had succumbed to the allure of a simple life, but Tori had never shared their sentiments. She craved the opportunities that the world had laid out for anyone brave enough to reach out and all she wanted was an opportunity. Unfortunately, nothing much could be done when you're living as a lower-middle class citizen in the industrial district of Meridia, where most of your hard-earned cash is spent on university books and expensive coffee.[/indent] [indent]Perhaps the most interesting going on in Tori's life is that she's a member of one of Meridia's many gangs, specifically the Wreckers. They were a rag tag bunch, and since she grew up in the industrial district, her initiation into their ranks seemed almost natural. She grew up with many of the gang's members and knew their many quirks. It almost resembled a makeshift family, but like her own, it seemed like many of the gang's members were happy playing pretend in Meridia. The gang war itself had ceased to excite her, seeing as the pre-established rules promoting peace and order stopped an actual war to break through aside from a few skirmishes now and then. She hated it and would gladly launch an attack on the opposing gangs if she had any confidence that she could survive.[/indent] [indent]Although, the rumours of a group dead-set on zombifying Meridia may have piqued her interest. She'd have to keep an eye out on them. Who knows? They might just be her ticket out and into the world.[/indent] [b][u][color=ff7f50]S K I L L S:[/color][/u][/b] [indent][b]Strength[/b][/indent] [indent][b]Street-smarts[/b][/indent] [indent][b]Adaptable[/b][/indent] [b][u][color=ff7f50]W E A K N E S S E S:[/color][/u][/b] [indent][b]No set fighting style[/b][/indent] [indent][b]Fickle[/b][/indent] [indent][b]Low stamina[/b][/indent] [/hider] [/quote] This is really good so far, I love. Keep up the good work. :D