[quote=@Stein] As always, I love your face claims. Perf. And like, 10,000 house points for slipping the word ethereal into that CS. I really love how you've done a good job at checking her powers and giving appropriate weaknesses. I'd like to see something in terms of Applications for the powers. There's a shit-ton of applications that we've seen with those powers, but what is our girl Belle going to do with it? Also something in the area of personality as well. We get a little bit of who Belle is, but not much. I always like seeing a bit of that, especially for something Mavericks based. The motivation is a little lacking. I like the "jumping off point" you give when you say she just wants to understand her body. So is this burgeoning vigilante life going to start off like an experiment to her? That could definitely be interesting. I'd just like to see something that would make her want to run off and join the Mavericks. Overall, I don't really have any "problems" with the RP. Really just clean up those small points and you're good to go. [/quote] Sure. Would you like the additional information worked in to the existing sections, or in their separate bits? My only issue is with the motivation. She'll be becoming a vigilante just to understand her powers and through them her body, but for joining the Mavericks... I don't want to spoil anything. Is that ok? I can clarify on skype if needs be. [quote=@Nemaisare] Also, yay! Bugs! Another girl! Hi Roman! *waves spastically* [/quote] Hey. I hope you like my character.