[@RBYDark] What a jerk. I'm glad I have a sister and not a brother, but I guess sisters can and will be just as bad. *rolls eyes* Well, anyway, what I was going to say about it was that we could use some elements from the general society in it, and on the same line, lessen the alien influences? For instance, maybe there are only a handful of other intelligent species because of the wars before humans got on the scene.

LOL. Good luck with the glitchy highjacking then! (...Hope your ship doesn't blow up. XD )

Wow. You draw them? Very cool. Go ahead and draw them if you'd like, then, I wouldn't want to stop the creative process! I would draw my characters, too, but I lack the time, especially seeing as I spend any drawing time I find to practice for my eventual graphic novels. Oh, and great little bio. I just started the pilot's. 

Eek, those were, ah, very pleasant pictures... O_o 
As for suggestions, I do some basic photo editing for my characters, so if you did find [b]him[/b], I could add facial scaring if you wanted. It's an old injury now, correct?