[@Crimson Raven] So, I've decided to side with Narrator on this one. Not only because he posted his first. Not only because your characters are thematically nearly identical, and having two overpowered deaths running around reaping everything that moves would make me reach for the cyanide. But also because your sheet has some key errors that need to be addressed, some of which I'd say other people have flirted with as well. [hider=Objections] 1. Your character is a god. This is something I've gone on about before, and I'll take responsibility for it, as my liberal use of the word "demigod" without sufficient explanation seems to have caused some confusion. The Children are corporal, physical beings who live in the now. If you cut one, they'll bleed. They have no supernatural roles in the world beyond those that they create themselves. There is no afterlife to bring souls to, and even if there were your character couldn't be the one to do it, because you're a soul too, just a powerful and permanent one. Children only have aspects in a thematical sense. 2. You're not really in the Pit Let me re-iterate this. You either sided with the Angels, and were thus betrayed with the rest, or was branded a demon and locked away before then. There's no option to have not been locked up, or to have never picked a side. The Angels didn't call their job done until every Child not among them was imprisoned. As far as going willingly, demons could have done so, although it'd be very strange. But Angels were locked away in the Betrayal, which by definition excludes having been willing to be locked away. 3. Reviving insanely fast Children take a looooong time to ressurect. Typically, about a century. If you're very fast about it you might be able to do it in a decade. But a week? No. 4. Overpowered (vs other Children) I said you could be as strong as Cthulu, and I meant it. But what I should perhaps have specified is that you have to have some kind of vulnerabilities. Not necessarily "weak to fire" or "bullseye on chest" vulnerabilities, but you have to be feasibly possible to kill, somehow. Take Nod: He's a giant murderous warrior, and probably a terror in single combat. But you can imagine that he might meet his match and end up stabbed to death or something. Admittedly, this same point made me hesitate over Narrator's sheet. But in the end I let it slide because it wasn't blatant. Thanatos can go anywhere, kill anyone, and wipe out entire armies. I'm sorry to say, none of the Children should be able to single-handedly wipe out an army. [/hider] Whew, that was heavy stuff! You clearly know how to write, and write well. So it pains me to say that I just can't in good conscience accept your sheet as it is. In fact, I would recommend you morph your character into something different, painful as restarting may be. You could focus on your relationship with souls, and be a wandering ghost-whisperer? Just a thought.