[@Anima]Thanks a lot for the feedback. Will modify my CS according to it, expect an update soon

[b]EDIT:[/b] Here is my modified CS. The parts that have been added/changed are in red for easier reading.

[hider=Lennart J. Webbs]
[img]http://cdn-r1.unilad.co.uk/wp-content/uploads/2015/07/55b8d7cae94dd.jpg[/img]

[color=00a651][b]Personal Information[/b][/color]
Full Name: Lennart James Webbs
Age: 24
Home City: Tulsa, OK

Appearance: Lennart stands at 5,8" and is of a leaner build comprared to other soldiers. His light brown hair is medium long and usually a big mess, his beard on the other hand is well-kept. His left pinky finger is missing, cut off during a confrontation in the war. 

[color=00a651][b]Military Status[/b][/color]
Rank: Corporal 
Doctrine: STG Operative - Sniper

[b][color=00a651]Equipment:[/color][/b] 
[hider=CAMx Light Assault Armor]
[img]http://i.imgur.com/kpIQInM.jpg[/img]
This armor is designed for snipers of the STG, allowing the user to be more mobile and stealthy at the cost of protection. Its surface is coated in nanoparticles that can assume the color of the suits' surroundings, making the operative a lot harder to spot. A built-in mechanism nullifies the wearer's shakiness, increasing the accuracy of the shots he takes. [/hider]

[hider=FSR 4.7]
[img]http://i.imgur.com/bey3P.jpg[/img]
One of the finest pieces of technology ever created, the latest FSR model is the perfect weapon for any sniper. The scope allows for customizable magnification up to 25x, as well as night- and infrared vision. The cartridges and can be loaded with regular or armor-penetrating bullets. The FSR is a very reliable weapon, able to read environmental inputs to adjust for wind and weather conditions. Major downsides are the reload time of 4.7 secs and it's size, that makes it hard to use outside of a stationary position.[/hider]


[hider=LP4 Pistol]
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Common side-weapon among STG operatives. It comes with built-in laser and flashlight attachements for when the need arises. It's magazine can hold up to 14 bullets. This weapon is used for close quarters, where the sniper rifle would be too clumsy to use. 
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[hider=Other Equipment]
Military Knife - Used in combination with the LP4 pistol for silent attacks in CQC situations
Movement Sensor - Little gadgets than can be placed around the sniper's position, detects movement in a 15ft radius, beeps loudly when activated
CF Contact Lense - Contact lense that works just like binoculars
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[b]Training:[/b] Lennart had nothing to do with weapons or the military until he ended up at the UGC-Alpha facility at the age of 19. Wanting to help humanity and fueled by revenge, he decided to become a soldier and fight at the frontlines. However, Lennart proved to be less than perfect for the job, having trouble with the demanding physical training at first. When he held a sniper rifle for the first thime though, his instructor finally saw a niche where the young man could excel. From there on out, he was trained to become proficient in long-distance engagements, focusing on accuracy and finesse instead of brute force. Lennart succesfully finished his military instruction, and for a time he worked for the City Defense Taskforce. Their mission is to sweep the UGC's perimeter on the surface, making sure no hostiles try to find a way into the city. [color=ed1c24]Over the years, Lennart has accumulated a total of 22 confirmed kills, his biggest success however was his involvment in stopping a major group of hostiles from entering the UGC. It was a dark and hostile night, a storm had been brewing throughout the majority of the day and into the night. Lennart and his squad were on their regular patrol, when suddenly a group of 8 machines attacked them out of nowhere. 2 members of the team died almost instantly, leaving only Lennart and another member to fend for themselves. They managed to escape the ambush, killing 2 machines while doing so. Once they reached the UGC entry point, it was time to take a stand. Having to deal with the darkness and the stormy weather made their job that mauch harder, as the stand-off between the two factions dragged on for almost thirty minutes. Thanks to Lennart's superior sniping and obversation skills, the duo managed to kill off the remaining 6 machines without allowing them access to the UGC. It was this merit that caught the STG's interest,and eventually lead to Lennart's recruitment a few months after.[/color]

[b]Skills:[/b] 
[i]Sniper[/i] - Lennart is very proficient at long-range engagements. He is patient and observant, taking his time to place the perfect shot
[i]Bird's Eye View[/i] - Placing himself in higher situated vantage points, Lennart is able to observe the battlefield in its entirety and can relay any useful information to his allies

[color=00a651][b]Personality:[/b][/color]
Lennart is rather quiet and an introvert, preferring to be the observant listener to the loud talker. He is often lost in his own thoughts, imaging a life where the world has not gone completely down the drain. An honest and loyal person, he values human life above all else. The young man does not consider himself a bad person, however, he does nurture a lot of hate towards the machines and what they have done to humanity. This hate is the fuel that keeps him going, although he prefers to hide those dark thoughts, keeping a calm exterior at all times. In battle, it is this calmness that allows Lennart to be an efficient sniper. He methodically picks his target and waits for the right opportunity to strike. People who befriend Lennart will find out that once he warms up to you, he can actually be a very friendly and sometimes even funny individual, who has experienced a lot of loss and pain during the war.  

[color=00a651][b]Backstory:[/b][/color]
Lennart James Webbs was born in Tulsa and lived there until the war broke loose. Son to a teacher and a secretary, his life was full of love and happiness for a pretty long time. He did well at school, never being the smartest, but always getting good grades and making a lot of friends. Fan of the outdoors, he enjoyed to ride his bike and play soccer; camping was Lennart's favorite way to spend any and all vacations. His dream was to become a teacher, just like his dad, and probably stay in Tulsa for the rest of his life. Everything changed though when the revolts started, and the young boy would soon realize that his understanding of the world and everything in it wouldn't matter a damn.

Tulsa's revolts were not as bloody or destructive as those happening in the major American cities, but it was enough to scare the Webbs family away from their home and life as they knew it. Fearing impending death, the family packed together as much as they could and left the city, like so many others did at the time. Living on the road for weeks, only staying in places for short periods of time or living in the forests if needed, luck eventually ran out. Lennart and his family were close to Dallas, and against their better judgement, they needed to enter the city to restock their supplies. Arriving at a tunnel, there was no way to keep going on the road, as abandoned cars and piles of rubble made progressing with the car impossible. The Webbs got out, and proceeded their journey by foot. Finally in the city, they stopped at the first pharmacy they found, which would turn out to be the biggest mistake of their lives. When the Webbs got in, they were greeted by three shiny, steel-coated individuals.

Lennart is not sure what really happened that day, his mind has blocked out most of the memories, the bits and pieces he remembers are marked by screams, broken glass, and a terrible amount of pain. All he knows is that, when he regained consciousness again, Lennart was laying in some kind of make-shift bed, surrounded by men in military uniform and other civilians. There was intense pain coming from his left hand, and when the boy checked for a reason, he let out a high-pitched scream: His left pinky was missing. A doctor came over, trying to calm down Lennart, who was now crying and asking to see his parents. The doctor explained that Lennart had been saved by a group of soldiers that were sweeping the area, but there was nothing they could do to save his parents. This day marks the point where the once happy and cheerful Lennart became the quiet and introvert person we know today. [color=ed1c24]With his family dead and the poor boy being by himself, he decided he would one day get payback for his loss[/color]

The following years in his life were marked by the boys hate for the machines and the thirst for revenge. Once him and the other survivors were transfered to UGC-Alpha a few months after his arrival, Lennart enrolled in the military service to stop feeling powerless, and hoping to eventually get the chance to avenge his parents.[/hider]

I hope this is ok, let me know if you need more