[quote=@Roman] [@Stein] in regards to personality, what exactly did you mean? Glimpses into behaviour through backstory? Tonal shifts in the bio? I haven't written a 'personality' section in a long time and I've come to rely on showing off my character IC as soon as I can. If it's just a simple touch-up of her history then that will be easy but if it's something more focused I may take a bit more time. Otherwise, Applications are done and I've re-written the motivation to be more concise. I'll re-link the touched-up CS when the personality is cleared up. [/quote] Dammit Roman, why are you asking sober me to explain things inebriated me said? Egh, gimme a sec... Honestly, it was just one of those things that stood out to me. But you could do all of those, even just a sentence that shows her on a typical day of her life. It's a touch-up more than anything wrong in the foundation.