[@Cruallassar] A few things with it need adjusting:
- Appearance needs to be filled in, not sure if you just haven't a picture yet but you'll need to fill that at some point.
- Go into detail more about those blaster pistols.
- How did he end up with a Mandolorian fighter? I'm assuming it's a [url=http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Kom'rk-class_fighter/transport]Kom'rk-class fighter/transport[/url].

Fix those and it's good to go.